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Chapter 4://Hallway Oblivion and The Proposal

Post  Ven on Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:05 pm

Chapter 3://The Overlord?? - Summary

Ai and Ven keep there guard up. When all of a sudden out of the Dark Aura comes an unknown figure. This unknown figure knows both of there names and has them both freaked out. The gang is the summoned back by Ai finally and everyone is in fear of what this unknown figure is doing here. What is he and who is he. Ven then reveals that he knows that the unknown figures name is Guddley, because of the hints in his letters and the unreadable signature. Guddley doesnít seem to be surprised with Ven knowledge about him and finally reveals his true form. (Well his human like form to us.) He then tells the gang to follow him not by asking then but more of a command. He tells them that theyíll be going into the Hallway of Oblivion and are in Deathís Hollow Castle. What is in story for our heroes in the next chapter? What is this proposal that Guddley has in mind? Will they make it out alive or die trying to save Dalmasca.

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Last time we left our heroes following Guddley into the Hallway of Oblivion. He is now read to reveal his Proposal and what he want's out of all of those who have come. Will our heroes agree? or will they end up fighting him?

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Re: Chapter 4://Hallway Oblivion and The Proposal

Post  Spirit on Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:06 pm

*they follow him into the Hallway Oblivion when he suddenly stops and says"

"I want Ai the Mage and Ven the Sage to pick one of their closes friends each. I need them for a celebration Iím planning. This is for the awakening of a new Dalmasca, with the power of the jewel and of pure hearts. If you refuse this offer I will kill you summons and send them to Oblivionís Watch, which Iím sure you Delovan know plenty about. Now what do you guys say?"
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Re: Chapter 4://Hallway Oblivion and The Proposal

Post  Kat on Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:07 pm

Kat almost laughed at his proposal. "You know that we're never going to give in easily." She drew her sword.

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Post  aiyiki on Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:09 pm

Aiyiki gave him a death glare. Kirkuro and Nirkuro felt Aiyiki's anger and they stood up preparing for commands. "you're kidding me right? NO spirit here can be trusted. If we are to trust you you must have a note before I draw my sword." Aiyiki had her hand on her katana.
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Re: Chapter 4://Hallway Oblivion and The Proposal

Post  Kat on Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:11 pm

((You know that each chapter has to last about a week xD Length doesn't matter, but content does.))

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Post  Rain on Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:13 pm

Rain listened intentively.

"Are we going to fight? Or just give in?"
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Post  Rain on Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:14 pm

((This is completely off subject, but wanna see my contest entry? Its on the right, if you click My Pics.

The drawing with the background. xD http://CrayonColour.piczo.com/?g=37150927&cr=1 ))
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Re: Chapter 4://Hallway Oblivion and The Proposal

Post  Ven on Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:14 pm

((Yes I know that each chapter has to last a week, but the last one was more of an introduction of Guddley and the big events that are about to happen, this one will last a week though i'm sure of it lol, sorry about that btw))

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Post  Rain on Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:15 pm

((I like the music on my piczo site. xD))
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Post  Kat on Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:16 pm

Kat looked at Rain, almost shocked. "Of course we are to fight! If we die, we die for Dalmasca. With honor!"

The ends of her hair lifted upward with energy, and her fingertips crackled on her sword. "Let's see how this guy deals with a little electricity"

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Re: Chapter 4://Hallway Oblivion and The Proposal

Post  aiyiki on Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:17 pm

"No! If we team up with him who knows what will happen? Get your note out or we fight." Aiyiki growled
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Re: Chapter 4://Hallway Oblivion and The Proposal

Post  Rain on Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:18 pm

"Oh! Oh! Water with electric currents!!!!"

Rain repeated the same steps as she had before with the water fight agaisnt Kat.

Once she water orb was made, she offered it to Kat.
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Post  Kat on Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:20 pm

Kat smiled. "Good thinking Rain!" She broke the water orb so that it made a path to the strange newcomer. Then she lit a spark.

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Re: Chapter 4://Hallway Oblivion and The Proposal

Post  Ven on Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:21 pm

"NO! We mustn't fight him yet. He might have the jewel with him and we could accidentally destroy it."

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Post  Rain on Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:22 pm

Rain grinned.

"Hey, here's a wild idea! What if he's not a bad guy. xD"
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Post  Rain on Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:22 pm

"Daang. Then do we swipe the jewel or what?" Rain whispered.
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Post  Kat on Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:23 pm

Kat frowned. "Ven," she whispered, "This was meant to paralyze him. The jewel being a jewel won't be effected, will it?" She turned to Aiyiki for an answer.

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Re: Chapter 4://Hallway Oblivion and The Proposal

Post  Ven on Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:24 pm

"Exactly, we have no idea if he might be the key to helping us save Dalmasca. He may even be the assasain that killed the King's brother. But we need to get all we can out of him, before we decide if we're going to help him or kill him. He's also our only way out of this castle, remember that. Kat it might not hurt him, I sense that he's not human."

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Post  Kat on Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:24 pm

"Rain, he just threatened to kill us and use the jewel for all power and destruction. I think that classifies him as 'the bad guy'" -__-

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Post  Rain on Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:25 pm

Kat wrote:"Rain, he just threatened to kill us and use the jewel for all power and destruction. I think that classifies him as 'the bad guy'" -__-

"Oh." Rain murmered "Heheh."

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Post  aiyiki on Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:26 pm

"We cannot trust him. No one can be trusted if they do not have a note. We have to keep a close eye on him. He has a dark aura I dont trust." Aiyiki looks at The dark figure.
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Post  Rain on Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:27 pm

"What was your proposal again then?" Rain asked, turning back to Guddley.
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Post  Rain on Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:28 pm

((Ne, g2g eat now. Be back soon. I'm not that hungry. xD))
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Post  Kat on Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:28 pm

Kat laughed. "Rain. Always the pacifist negotiator."

She turned to Aiyiki. "You should know who has a letter, don't you? Weren't you the one who sent them?"

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Re: Chapter 4://Hallway Oblivion and The Proposal

Post  Spirit on Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:28 pm

"This was my proposal once again. I want Ai the Mage and Ven the Sage to pick one of their closes friends each. I need them for a celebration Iím planning. This is for the awakening of a new Dalmasca, with the power of the jewel and of pure hearts. If you refuse this offer I will kill you summons and send them to Oblivionís Watch, which Iím sure you Delovan know plenty about. Now what do you guys say?? "
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